LOL, poor Oracle Knight indeed. XDD Though I wonder if he's feeling more awkward or scared for his life now that he's caught Asch in the act. I can't imagine the original letting him escape with their would-be secret make out session. lmao. Lovely work with your media! It's so hard for me to get shades that dark, but you got the blacks so nice and rich~ I especially like how you shaded Luke's pants. - -b I also love how Luke doesn't seem to care at all that they've been seen. XD <3

Thank you for your entry! I'll update soon~

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Ahhh, advanced critique, huh? Okay, but first, I must flourish with praise! Luke looks like he's about to say, "What the hell do you want" in some kind of yankee accent (XD) and Asch just looks so thoroughly embarrassed. You did the armor really well, because I can see the shades working their way in a very good way (light direction and all of that jazz).

I can only unfortunately say one critique because I'm not one for judging art, but it seems to me that Asch's shoulders are a bit more broader then they would usually look, but for all I know that's just your style, but it makes Asch appear like a huge muscle-man with the strange smaller body portion thing, but like I said, that could be just your art, or my bad eyesight!

P.S. I think you did wonderfully on the hands.

Also good luck on the contest!

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Thank you so much for the critique! I really appreciate it! I tend to draw men buff for some reason... It's COMPLETELY unintentional, but I can't seem to get around doing it. >_____<! I actually trimmed him off quite a bit from my original sketch. He was like... Goku buff in that one.

Oh well, I'll keep on trying, and hopefully one day I'll get it right. :B

Thanks again!

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Yeah, I'm sure one day you will! And you're quite welcome!

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